Tuesday 23 September 2014

Peel paragraph practise

Rimu is the best syndicate at TIS.

Rimu is the best syndicate at TIS because we unite as an army. Firstly, we unite as an army by competing in the ultimate relay as a team. For example, we cheer on our peers and encourage them to give it their all. Secondly, when someone in our house gets a prize or excels in something, we unite together and congratulate them by giving them a Rimu clap. Finally, we unite together as an army by having each others back. For example, if someone is competing in a sporting event, and they don't have a very good race, we will say some encouraging words to pick the person right back up. It is for these reasons that I think that Rimu is the best syndicate at TIS.











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