Peel paragraph practise

Rimu is the best syndicate at TIS.

Rimu is the best syndicate at TIS because we unite as an army. Firstly, we unite as an army by competing in the ultimate relay as a team. For example, we cheer on our peers and encourage them to give it their all. Secondly, when someone in our house gets a prize or excels in something, we unite together and congratulate them by giving them a Rimu clap. Finally, we unite together as an army by having each others back. For example, if someone is competing in a sporting event, and they don't have a very good race, we will say some encouraging words to pick the person right back up. It is for these reasons that I think that Rimu is the best syndicate at TIS.

Practising Peel Paragraphs

Being a mum is easy.

It could be argued that being a mum is easy. Firstly, being a mum is a full on job. You need to put your children before yourself. For example when you are worrying about getting your lunch ready, you need to pack the lunch for your children before you can pack yours. Secondly, being a mum can be very stressful. I have seen kids not wanting to do what their mum tells them to, this could be stressful for the mum because she can not keep her kids under control. Lastly, being a mum is not easy because you always need to be on top of things. Like, if your child is into sports, you will need to know all the dates and times for their trainings and games. This could be very confusing. It is for these reasons that I think being a mum is not easy.

PEEL Paragraphs

Why is Mr Diver such a successful principal?

Mr Diver is a successful principal because he sets high standards.

Firsty, Mr Diver has rules regarding the use of language which keeps swearing off the school site. For example if you swear, you go home.  

Secondly, Mr Diver expects his students to be in the correct school uniform. If you are in the correct uniform, you will be rewarded and get a stars card.

Lastly, Mr Diver loves to win. If we excel or come first he will he will encourage and reward us by buying us BK or giving us recognition in the school newsletter.

Therefore, Mr Diver is such a successful principal.    

Voting

What percentage of the vote did each party win?

Nat 48.1% Lab 24.7% Green 10% Nzf 8.9% Maor 1.3% ACT 0.7% UFNZ 0.2% CNSP 4.1%

How will parliament look? (How many seats will each party have?)

Who is the Tauranga MP and which party is he/she from?

Simon Bridges, he is from National Party.

Who came 2nd and 3rd for Tauranga?

Clayton Mitchell, NZ First = 4486
Rachel Jones, Labour Party = 4317

Who is the BOP MP and which party is he/she from?

Todd Muller from National.

What regional seat does the Prime Minister hold?

How many people voted?

More than 700.000 people.

What portfolio does John Key hold?

Prime Minister.

Elections.

When is election day?

Saturday 20th September √

What hours can you vote on election day?

9am - 7pm √

What date does this year’s election officially end?

4th October √

Hoardings- On election day all billboards must be removed by midnight 19th September

Sign-written vehicles- You can't have anything on your car on election day which says vote for simon bridges etc because they could influence people

Fixed signage on party headquarters and MP’s electorate offices- You can leave regular signs in office

Delivery of election material prohibited- Politicians can't put advertising in peoples mail boxes or letters from politicians on election day.

Websites and social media- Keep what you had posted before election day but no post on election day.

Processions and demonstrations- You are not aloud to protest or use a load hallier to say vote for national etc.

Streamers, rosettes, ribbons etc- You can to wear a badge or ribbon to support your party but not aloud to say the party only colours.

Clothing promoting the party or candidate- No t-shirts saying vote national but can wear colours

Imitation ballot papers- Can't hand out cards that look the same as the ballet card

Assistance to get to a voting place- They can ask if the person needs a ride but they can not say anything to influence the person.

At the voting place- MP's are not aloud in voting place but only aloud in to cast there own vote

Campaigning around advance voting places- Not aloud to stand outside and influence people at the last minute

Political Parties

The Civilian Party polices
- Defend the traditional institution of marriage as the union between one man and one volumetric flask.

- Hold on a national referendum on the value of referenda.

- Alleviate poverty amongst children by giving every poverty-stricken child a llama as a means to a basic income.

- Make Wellington airport safer by moving it to Christchurch.

- Ice cream.

How to set up a political party.

There are certain requirements that all political parties must adhere to in order to apply for and maintain their party registrations. They are:

1. An acceptable party name (and any abbreviation).
2. Satisfactory evidence of at least 500 eligible members.
3. Statutory declarations from its party secretary concerning membership, intention to contest general elections and advising of any component parties.
4. Party membership rules showing what is required for current financial membership, and candidate selection rules which provide for the democratic involvement of members in the process.
5. An auditor (or person who has agreed to be auditor when the party is registered).
6. A party secretary with a postal address and contact details.
7. Either the secretary, or a sitting MP who is a current financial member of the party, to make the application.
8. $500 application fee.

My party - The New Zealand Party Of New Zealand.

HEALTH - Up to the age of 14 doctor visits are free.

EDUCATION - No more than 25 students in a class. 

DEFENCE - If any policeman gets hurt (on the job) their doctor fees are free.

ELDERLY - If you are older than 85 you will get $1000 to maintain your health.

ENVIRONMENT -  No more cutting down trees (unless you really need to)

BUSINESS - Everyone over the age of 25 needs to gave a paying job.

SPORT - Until you reach year 7 you must do at least one sport a year.

FOOD - Cut down on fast food companies to reduce obeseness in NZ.

ANIMALS - No animal abuse what so ever!

 

Planet - Planet

Hi my name is Ella and spending 9 years on one planet never gets old. I decided to come to Planet - planet to search for the so called "lost treasure." To a company me on my journey I decided to bring along my pet monkey and my best friend. Molly the monkey has brown eyes, with a unusually fat tail. She loves to eat her bananas on my shoulders. Un like Molly the Monkey, my best friend known as Bugs had gorgeous green eyes with long dirty blonde hair that reaches the middle of her back when its out. A few days ago we travelled to the other side of Planet Planet to start digging, but little did we know that our spaceship was low on gas, in a result to that our ship exploded. So there I was stuck on the other side of Planet Planet with nothing to help me dig but a monkey and a glamor girl. We slowly but surely start digging, about 1h into it Molly the Monkey spots a shadow and starts her ear piercing scream, Bugs and I turn around anxiously and to our surprise, we were looking right into the eyes of a big dark green creature with tentacles 15m long. Without thinking all three of us run for our lives.

(Im not quite finished)